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Sunday, June 12, 2011

AFTER A LONG TIME...........



Today we saw each other,
After a long period of suffer.

The morning bells were ringing,
The pretty birds were singing.

Some freshness I felt after seeing her face.
Emotions flew out those were gone under base.


Voices of thanks from both sides,
The legacy of caring, on final rides.

“WELL SAID IT LASTS FOR A WHILE,
MOMENT IS NOTHING MORE THAN A TRIAL.”

Honestly, I tried to see you every morning.
After failing, gave myself so called warning.


Not fair to grow in a while my dear.
It takes me to grow year n year.

I wish for a closer view, my desire
Have to attain that height to admire.

If you arise many times relative to character of height,
I will be pleased to have that pretty site.


But you are uncaring as always,
Will go simultaneously,with your rays.

But I will try to find
The strange thing of your mind.

Every dusk you left me alone,
Then I fell like flesh without bone.

Whenever you go with your fast cart,
I find myself alone with the darkness of my heart.


I hope such mornings will come every day,
With my eyes open to see and mouth to say.

I wish to fall in love with this freshness of surrounding,
To end with a lovely bond,without any bounding.

"Love you God, early mornings are pleasant,
  Everything is sweet whatever you have sent.
  Thank you for all such giving,without any rent,
  My memories are few but will never faint."


18 comments:

  1. I loved the optimistic attitude u kept in all the verses...
    it reflects a positive energy
    well done !!!

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  2. thx jyoti.....actually i wanted 2 say 2 different things through this poem...nd dats how i plotted this one.....

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  3. really hrt touchng...carry on...

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  4. This is impressive especially since English isn't your first language. I really like the look of your blog too. Found your intro. on Blog Farm. Good work.

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  5. @ palak.... thx ...

    @stacie.......thx for visiting nd also for comment.......i also found ur blog interesting.......:)

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  6. A doctor who does poetry, I'm not too sure how I feel about that eh.

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  7. @blaq mind.........just try to express ur feelings.........

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  8. @vijay......thx :)
    ui wud like 2 suggest u to read other poems of mine too....;)

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  9. Hi,

    Jus gone thru ur poems..
    they are really enlightening I say..

    thanx for stopping by my blog!
    thnx for followting too..hope I see you again!

    njoyed my presence here...keep writing :)

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  10. @amit....thx...:)

    @gowthami...thx for visiting and following mine as well....:)

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