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Thursday, July 14, 2011

THE IDEA OF ULTIMATE PEACE.......





"No one to heal
 No one to deal
 No one to care
     No one to share"

"The pleasure of being alone
 Time to hear every pin on stone"

 Uninterrupted natural music
Echo of sound how’s the magic





The curves of tides
Always towards sides

Flow of water stealing my heart
But will never stop to talk and distort

A stone dropped in water itself
Who cares not about myself

Few drops then jumped in air
Celebrating that stone came there

“SOMEBODY HAVE GAINED
SOMEBODY HAVE LOST
SOMEBODY GETS PROFIT
SOMEBODY PAYS COST”

“Equilibrium has to be attained
The life has to be maintained.
Desires should be flexible to amend
Because somewhere there is an end”

This moment if it's enjoyment
Next moment it will be discontentment

In whole life full of dealings
Only few hidden things, designed as feelings

The indefinite wings of desire
Not easy every time to acquire

I just took rebirth and started dealings
Have lost many things but no hard feelings

Dealing with my own desires
To whom everyone admires

Don’t you think these all are fake
Stop it now for God's sake...

You better know how it felt
Before eating it your ice-cream melt

Enquire, enquire; enquire your dreams
Then try to put them in different frames

“Do we really belong here?
The world full of words sharp as spear
Betrayal, jealously, infidelity everywhere
Unstoppable race here and there”







The next moment how it will be
As unsolved riddle without any key

Original face, behind golden mask
And our eyes not daring to ask

Oh! such a betrayal you faced
I have no rights but I just said







I too have a same story
But you know experience is our glory

Hey! Every time I started from this point
But my empty hands are what my destiny appoints

Got but lost everything by reaching here
But after journey of miles I have become sincere

If we had nothing then why to be sad
But sadness after joy will kill you as mad

"If the tears are the things in our final reach
How’s my idea of ultimate peace!!!







14 comments:

  1. Dr.,Wow , what a very beautiful piece you made! I love your final line ,"If the tears are the things in our final reach
    How’s my idea of ultimate peace!!!
    I t made me think what's in the tears ? can it really give ultimate peace?

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  2. This is so awesome! I look forward to reading more!

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  3. truelyyyy inspiring poem........great work........

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  4. Very beautiful poem with lovely pictures. I appreciate for your lovely and excellent piece of writing.
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  5. hey there,

    your poem is so meaningful, and I love how you use the pictures to capture the essence of your words.

    However I disagree about the whole equilibrium, I think that life is chaos, sometimes you will gain and never lose, just like the scale will end up tipping at one direction

    anyways, good luck and god bless

    ~Hilda

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  6. @angel...thx for ur sweet comment......

    @interruption.....thx for reading and comment....have a look on my other post as well till i post newer one....

    @babli.....thx......i will be reading ur posts as soon as possible....time limitations b`coz f studies....

    @vivek.....thx bro....

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  7. @hilda....hi frd....im really happy to see ur comment.....thx......and abt the equilibrium.......i talked in context of the whole population...not abt an individual...wat does these lines suggest us....

    “SOMEBODY HAVE GAINED
    SOMEBODY HAVE LOST
    SOMEBODY GETS PROFIT
    SOMEBODY PAYS COST”

    means life is different for everyone.....and im agree with ur opinion as well...b`coz as u said sometimes we gain everything and lose nothing...and vice versa.........:)
    thx again/........keep visiting.....
    :)

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  10. the poem is really very inspiring, the way u hv compared the natural processes with our life is very impressive....
    the idea of maintaining equlibrium with our desires which has no end and comparing both the negative & positive aspects of life is amazing...:)

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  11. @ananymous..(shivani jain).....thx for ur sweet words......and for finding such deepness in my poem..........:)

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