No one to deal
No one to care
No one to share"
"The pleasure of being alone
Time to hear every pin on stone"
Uninterrupted natural music
Echo of sound how’s the magic
The curves of tides
Always towards sides
Flow of water stealing my heart
But will never stop to talk and distort
A stone dropped in water itself
Who cares not about myself
Few drops then jumped in air
Celebrating that stone came there
“SOMEBODY HAVE GAINED
SOMEBODY HAVE LOST
SOMEBODY GETS PROFIT
SOMEBODY PAYS COST”
“Equilibrium has to be attained
The life has to be maintained.
Desires should be flexible to amend
Because somewhere there is an end”
This moment if it's enjoyment
Next moment it will be discontentment
In whole life full of dealings
Only few hidden things, designed as feelings
The indefinite wings of desire
Not easy every time to acquire
I just took rebirth and started dealings
Have lost many things but no hard feelings
Dealing with my own desires
To whom everyone admires
Don’t you think these all are fake
Stop it now for God's sake...
You better know how it felt
Before eating it your ice-cream melt
Enquire, enquire; enquire your dreams
Then try to put them in different frames
“Do we really belong here?
The world full of words sharp as spear
Betrayal, jealously, infidelity everywhere
Unstoppable race here and there”
The next moment how it will be
As unsolved riddle without any key
Original face, behind golden mask
And our eyes not daring to ask
Oh! such a betrayal you faced
I have no rights but I just said
I too have a same story
But you know experience is our glory
Hey! Every time I started from this point
But my empty hands are what my destiny appoints
Got but lost everything by reaching here
But after journey of miles I have become sincere
If we had nothing then why to be sad
But sadness after joy will kill you as mad
"If the tears are the things in our final reach
How’s my idea of ultimate peace!!!
Dr.,Wow , what a very beautiful piece you made! I love your final line ,"If the tears are the things in our final reach
ReplyDeleteHow’s my idea of ultimate peace!!!
I t made me think what's in the tears ? can it really give ultimate peace?
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ReplyDeleteyour poem is so meaningful, and I love how you use the pictures to capture the essence of your words.
However I disagree about the whole equilibrium, I think that life is chaos, sometimes you will gain and never lose, just like the scale will end up tipping at one direction
anyways, good luck and god bless
~Hilda
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@hilda....hi frd....im really happy to see ur comment.....thx......and abt the equilibrium.......i talked in context of the whole population...not abt an individual...wat does these lines suggest us....
ReplyDelete“SOMEBODY HAVE GAINED
SOMEBODY HAVE LOST
SOMEBODY GETS PROFIT
SOMEBODY PAYS COST”
means life is different for everyone.....and im agree with ur opinion as well...b`coz as u said sometimes we gain everything and lose nothing...and vice versa.........:)
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ReplyDeletethe idea of maintaining equlibrium with our desires which has no end and comparing both the negative & positive aspects of life is amazing...:)
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ReplyDeleteReally nice poem with mesmerizing and truly sensible words
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for your kind words
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