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Saturday, June 18, 2011

I WANNA BE A BIRD............




Won over the domes,
For getting d kites...
Far away from home,
Seeking better sites...
Better games i played,
Better names i heard...
Now i wanna fly,
I wanna be a bird....

Many lectures i have listened,
Got a few in mind...
Except my sweetest mom,
No one was kind.....
Scrumptious food all time,
Can't forget d sweet curd...
Now i wanna fly,
I wanna be a bird...

Since a long time,
Have not seen my mom....
Can't tolerate now,
I wanna go home...
Riches, prominence reputation,
Everything is absurd..
Now i wanna fly,
I wanna be a bird....




14 comments:

  1. awesome bhaiya....evry1 muss read it who is far away frm dier parnts...heart touchng..crsly

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  2. @palak.... thx.....i wrote it when i was missing home badly.....

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  3. can't hold the nerves..........trulyyyyyy awsum......must read every1......

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  4. VERY TOUCHY LINES,nicely composed,u must be a poet....

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  5. @satviki....thx....
    but im not a professional one.....just trying to improve.....
    thx for visiting and reading.....go through my other creations too...
    :)

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  6. Writer, the child in you speaks!Nice one! your blog got a very nice color combination and neat! More power!

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