Won over the domes,
For getting d kites...
Far away from home,
Seeking better sites...
Better games i played,
Better names i heard...
Now i wanna fly,
I wanna be a bird....
Many lectures i have listened,
Got a few in mind...
Except my sweetest mom,
No one was kind.....
Scrumptious food all time,
Can't forget d sweet curd...
Now i wanna fly,
I wanna be a bird...
Since a long time,
Have not seen my mom....
Can't tolerate now,
I wanna go home...
Riches, prominence reputation,
Everything is absurd..
Now i wanna fly,
I wanna be a bird....
awesome bhaiya....evry1 muss read it who is far away frm dier parnts...heart touchng..crsly
ReplyDelete@palak.... thx.....i wrote it when i was missing home badly.....
ReplyDeletecan't hold the nerves..........trulyyyyyy awsum......must read every1......
ReplyDeletethx saurav....... :)
ReplyDeleteThat's beautifully woven.
ReplyDeletethx alka ji...:)
ReplyDeleteB'ful, lovely composition
ReplyDelete@M.verma ji.....thx :)
ReplyDeleteVERY TOUCHY LINES,nicely composed,u must be a poet....
ReplyDelete@satviki....thx....
ReplyDeletebut im not a professional one.....just trying to improve.....
thx for visiting and reading.....go through my other creations too...
:)
hey nice one :)
ReplyDelete@monica.........thank u......:)
ReplyDeleteWriter, the child in you speaks!Nice one! your blog got a very nice color combination and neat! More power!
ReplyDelete@angel.....thx... :)
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